Wednesday, 19 December 2012

The poetry of running

The author, racing in 'Tough Guy' 2011
and not thinking of much at all,
never mind poetry
Recently, having been asked to contribute a piece about my writing practice to the Salt anthology 'In Their Own Words', I found myself writing about movement and how it relates to the way I like to work:

"Poems start in my body. More specifically, they start in my legs and lungs. That’s because I don’t write my best poems when I’m sitting at my desk, but when I’m moving; walking my dogs round the back of Oaks Farm and through the half-hearted woodland behind it, rock climbing on Stanage Edge in the summer, or, most often, when I’m out running and short of breath.

In his book ‘Musicology’, neuroscientist Oliver Sacks discusses ‘earworms’ - those snatches of music that seem to pop into our heads spontaneously and often torment us for days. For me, the genesis of a poem is a kind of earworm. As I run or walk or climb, I hear a line or phrase, almost as a kind of auditory hallucination. I usually try to ignore it at first and concentrate on whatever I’m meant to be doing (particularly when climbing – the last thing that’s going to help you with a tricky laybacking move is the opening of a sonnet). But these lines don’t go away. Worse, as I repeat them over in my head, they seem to suggest other lines – the original ‘earworm’ is extended in various, different ways, until I find other phrases that stick to it. This process continues for some time: picture me, if you will, dodging cars at the last minute as I sprint across a road, repeating a sequence of words, only remembering to check for traffic at the last minute. Who says poetry’s a safe occupation? As the poem grows, I become increasingly terrified I’ll forget it. But, inevitably, by the time I get home, the best lines have stuck and only the weaker ones, the ones that didn’t quite work, have been forgotten."

"Well, know I've written the poem, how
am I going to get down?"
Reading Barbara Lex's article on 'The Neurobiology of Ritual Trance' (1979) earlier this week, I started to think about what the activities of running and writing might share at a neural level. Lex is interested in how rhythmically structured activities affect the brain, inducing a kind of trance-like state. This aspect of rhythm is something that all rituals have in common, she argues. It is also an important component of poetry (certainly the kind of poetry I like to write) and, of course, physical exercise such as running.

Lex suggests that these kinds of rhythmic activity rely heavily on the right hemipshere with its more holistic, intuitive style of comprehension. Citing Ornstein (1972) she suggests that many ritual activities 'distract' the logical, comprehending left hemisphere, allowing the right to assume dominance for the duration of the ritual:

"The driving techniques employed in rituals are designed to sensitise or 'tune' the nervous system and thereby lessen inhibition of the right hemisphere and permit temporary right-hemisphere dominance....to achieve synchronisation of cortical rhythms in both hemispheres" (1979:144)

In 'The Neural Lyre', Turner makes a similar argument about the way metre and structure figure in poetry, 'distarcting' the left hemisphere. Might something similar be at work in activities like running and climbing that absorb so much attention? Might this be why I seem to hear 'earworms' when I'm out running, as if from nowhere?

Whatever the explanation (or lack thereof), any discussion of running seems a tenuous excuse to re-read Larkin's elegant 'Days':

Days

What are days for?
Days are where we live.
They come, they wake us
Time and time over.
They are to be happy in:
Where can we live but days?

Ah, solving that question
Brings the priest and the doctor
In their long coats
Running over the fields.

Philip Larkin


2 comments:

  1. I have found some of my best creative work has been written whilst on the move. There is something about being out in the fresh air that inspires that creative spark. I don't understand the scientific workings of the brain, but I think the natural elements spark a certain reaction which immerses our inner thoughts into something far deeper than our day today thoughts can perceive.

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  2. I came across this revelation as an art student many years ago, when I read Betty Edwards’ book, Drawing on the Right Side of the Brain. The learning has stood me in good stead over the years. I liken it to ‘quietening’ the left side of the brain, though others describe it as ‘tricking’ or ‘distracting’ it. I couldn’t begin to explain the neuro-science behind it, I only know that movement or activity seems to switch off the interfering, logical side of my brain, allowing my more creative, imaginative right side to kick in. If a poem, story, bit of dialogue or narrative I’m working on is ‘stuck’, I can sit at my desk or laptop for days despairing I’ll ever write another interesting syllable. Every word arrives dead on the page. Then I’ll go out for a bike ride, or perhaps a walk in my lunch break, thinking about nothing in particular, just enjoying the surroundings, when mysteriously the creative cogs in the brain suddenly start turning, and the words begin to flow. I’ve learned to take a small notebook and pencil with me wherever I am (or my mobile on bike rides, so I can dictate into the voice recorder). Like you Helen, if I’m caught in the open when the word storm arrives, without any means of recording it, I begin mumbling passages to myself like an idiot all the way home, fearful of everything evaporating into thin air. The reason I think the metaphor of ‘quietening’ is more apt than ‘tricking’ the LH brain, is because when I consciously try to ‘trick’ it (i.e. purposefully go on a walk, notebook and pen at the ready), it doesn’t seem to respond in the same way. Consciousness of the reason behind the activity seems to defeat the purpose, so you walk along thinking, come on then, words, where the bloody hell are you! It’s not until you give up and stop focusing on it, just enjoying the physical activity you’re doing, that the creative juices start flowing again. At least, that’s how it works for me. Oftentimes it will happen when I’m doing something mundane like having a bath, or standing at the supermarket checkout - any activity which seems to occupy the ‘guards’ of my consciousness long enough for my sub-conscious thoughts to slip out unnoticed. Paradoxically, there is one sedentary activity that seems to work, for some reason, and that’s lying in bed. There’s something about being tucked up under the duvet, gazing at the ceiling or with a notepad propped on one’s knees, which seems to soothe the brain, convincing it you’re at a place of rest rather than work. Michael Morpurgo is an avid bed-writer, I learned from a recent TV interview. And The Paris Review is full of anecdotes describing authors’ favourite armchairs and garden sheds. The imagination, it would seem, lives in an entirely different room in our heads to the conscious world of work and commerce we inhabit every day. That’s why young children are so creative, before they are taught to lock their make-believe away and grow up in the real world. Jogging, cycling, gardening, or just snuggling up under a duvet – as writers and artists we just need to find the key to unlock that room in our heads whenever we need to go there, and tell the logical, interfering practical world to stay outside, and mind its own business. http://www.frankbukowski.com/

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